First, a pic of the erasure as I would print it (click to get a better view):
Now, a lineated version in text for you to read / copy / manipulate:
as long as I can remember
The sky’s brought here by aliens
shitstorms going
on
I am outraged
I can
Crush
you
all the way down
Move!
it’s been raining 9 days straight
an automated replay
When you
gonna straighten out all
the
dead
the government
bubble
White
& non-ironic
on all platforms
for the next 500 years
The sky
& the moon
both
ways
like I’m everywhere / elated
Melinda Smith
Mar 2017

I think the only proper response to my poem is an erasure! Well played.
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